Once Apon A Time Comments

Your words are strong. It rarely happens where a relationship lasts forever. In your case, I hope you stay strong and never give into hate.

In this world nothing is forever....nice thoughts...nice flow of words. -SG x

Although it seems a sad poem but the rhyme and the words are chosen perfectly to make a beautiful poem like this, but I see that you have to write about happiness and hope your write will be awesome, anyway I enjoyed reading this magnificent poem :)

I like reading your work but I encourage you to reflect more on positive and not hurting yourself. Many will say it good to write about pain that may be true but I often worry about the reality of it. You have a life to live good for but continue to write and vary your style more. It may even bring you a bit of piece or happiness. In this sad world, it is nice to try to focus on things that are more positive. J. L. Price