Sunday, May 10, 2009

Once And Future Lover Comments

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i was once a rolling thunder
and came on the light a broken road is all i know
but with time it has grown
winding down the dusky road
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Bright Rose 24 May 2009

lovely 'story telling' poem, I felt your pain, loss and sadness, you express your ideas very well, I really felt it, it's like you have put a piece of your soul in it, lovely

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