Saturday, March 17, 2018

Once Again! ......But Without Illustration This Time...[ My Response To Yet Another Clever Rejoinder By Loke Kok Yee (To Me)] Comments

Rating: 4.8

I love my title, BUT I have NOW to write a poem to go with it. (SHIT! !)

My PH "friend" Loke Kok Yee ["Bro", as he is known to me]....
....has once again done some very, very clever poetic writing,
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Bri Edwards
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Loke Kok Yee 29 March 2018

Just couldn't get the word ' in after bigger in the second line. There must be an around erasing all the! Ho! Ho! Ho1

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Loke Kok Yee 29 March 2018

The truth is out; we are both full of gas And I’m not sure who is the bigger Valsa must be laughing in her sari At two clowns claiming poetic fluency a correction on my previous comment where the word was left out

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Loke Kok Yee 29 March 2018

And I; m not sure who is the bigger

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Loke Kok Yee 29 March 2018

The truth is out; we are both full of gas And I’m not sure who is the bigger Valsa must be laughing in her sari At two clowns claiming poetic fluency

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Loke Kok Yee 29 March 2018

just couldn't get the word in

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Nudershada Cabanes 24 March 2018

A delightful poem to read.fastastically done and the rejoinder too was cleverly penned. 10 Nudershada

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Valsa George 21 March 2018

At Ernakulam (Cochin) there is a place called Curry where you get delicious Kerala cuisines. If you let me know of your arrival, I shall come with my mate and son, but no gun! If Loke wishes to accompany you, I will be all the more delighted! About paying the bill, we shall decide later. However courtesy demands that I should pay because you are the guests here in our land! But if you are keen to pay, I won't object! A very interesting piece! ! !

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Valsa George 21 March 2018

I see some truth in these beautifully humorous poems. Wonder what must have been the subject of your conversation when you and Brian met at the restaurant or were your mouths too full to say something? (continued)

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Valsa George 21 March 2018

Neither one of us is in the genius category, but each reigns supreme with Poetic Glory! Now I understand that besides Bri and Brian, there is one more contestant to poetic glory..... none other than our Loke. Through his clever response, he is flaunting his credential for the title.....! Enjoyed your poem and its response (continued)

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Muzahidul Reza 18 March 2018

I'm writing this to share with thee, ....... it is a great corresponded poem, excellently penned to correspond with your bro [is it brother? ] and PH friend Loke Kok Yee, loved it, thanks for sharing the poem with us, ++++++++ 10

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