Thursday, September 15, 2011

Once Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

'First the worst'
They say...
'Second the best'
So cliche...
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C. K. Young
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Stefanie Fontker 26 September 2011

Very powerful words. I love the closing lines to this piece, they're simply magnificent. I hope you will continue to write.

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Romeo Della Valle 19 September 2011

Like I said in my poem IN PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS, ' I learned the hard and painful way that whenever there is an ending, there is also a new beginning' 'What I thought was a great loss, it turned out to be a blessing from the sky'. Your sad but well penned write clearly shows your strength and poetic potential to make you one of the best! 10+++ If time permits, you can read some of my poems and you can see that I went through what you experienced! Love is like a circle that seems to be without end or beginning! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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