Saturday, May 9, 2009

! Once Again Comments

Rating: 2.6

What is that incessant noise?
Irritatingly interrupting my sleep,
Unravelling the edges of a dream.
Slowly I swim to the surface of reality -
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Linda Ori
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Saadat Tahir 09 May 2009

Oh an then... with your permission i will turn to the other end of night an do a poem of the same name..if its ok with you...in a couple o days very nice cheers

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Saadat Tahir 09 May 2009

Hi Lin its so much fun when simple every day things the munadane and the ordinary are transformed into verse and polished almost beyong recognition...to assume...almost a greater than life size presence although its there very day yet...you made such an occasion out of ayawn an stretch phnomenal cheers

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A narrative & yarn worth a million accolades & votes....So well depicted is this every humans scenario, and NIGHTMARE! .....Midnight, you continue to shine bright, to your Readerships delight....'bout things that go Buzzzzzz in the night! ~ ~ ~ 2009

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