Monday, December 1, 2008

Once Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

If the night not came too fast,
And the life can ruled by myself,
I want to feedback,
So I can know more 'bout you,
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Kaede Rirunaru
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Antonio Liao 03 December 2008

this one of the poem that gives me to remember... that life i take will always be... a journey to believe..that its not mine alone.... a very beautiful poem.... thank you God bless

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Joseph Poewhit 03 December 2008

Poem contains a lot of emotions

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I find this a heart wrenching poem. Good work and great to see you writing again. Love Karin Anderson

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Sarwar Chowdhury 02 December 2008

Ammmmmazing waves in this composition...........10+

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Kite Remedy 02 December 2008

there you are, painting a picture of a friendship so far, but not lost of its features.. great works..

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Min Sia 02 December 2008

It would better if he could read this! But great poem..very expressive..unique..exquisite.. Dearest friend..you're doing great! A 10 for you!

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Kaede Rirunaru

Kaede Rirunaru

Surabaya, Indonesia
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