Rhythm's really your thing. Hard to imagine this written by someone so young (not patronizing you, it's a good thing, for your readers anyway) . Hint of agression in your writing too, which can only be good. S x
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Rhythm's really your thing. Hard to imagine this written by someone so young (not patronizing you, it's a good thing, for your readers anyway) . Hint of agression in your writing too, which can only be good. S x