Once Again Comments

You will always have a place Within my heart as well as my home Rachel Ann Butler

i like how your poems seemed to be addressed to someone. like s poetic letter, or discussion.

This was a deep poem because it showed a strong sense of love toward someone that you really cared for and even though it hurts you to see this person out of your life you have to remember to find a way to better yourself with out this person because if it was meant to be it was meant to be. If this person really feels this way about you move on with your life and try to better yourself because you can not live in the past anymore try to slowly move on and become a better person without this loved one. Even though it may hurt right now just remember though every dark night there is a bright day so just keep your head up and handle your business. Andrew Burant

Powerful, because my parents always where there for me no matter what. Good read.

very touching and moving - you can feel the tenderness