Once A While! / Kabhi Toh! Comments

A lovely poem. In urban settings a sense of detachment in so prevalent it doesn't escape the eyes. your poem expresses so very well.

we love this life following the soul of God- he blessed us with smiling face but love to hide Once a while when you see me Just give me a pleasant smile Please do ask my name once at least! just once to smile...

very nice. well rendering. i loved reading.

Geetha - your this poem is an eye opener declaring to the society or to humanity as how mean and self centered we became! ! ! We are so much isolated that don't feel to know or mix with the next door neighbor even forget the society or other bigger platforms. Very nicely you unzipped the pants of those neighbor who are of this nature (I believe they are very many) . Thank you Geetha for using this sugar coated saw in this poem.

Will it be not possible they both became the traveller of the same street. A very pleasant and soothing write.

Naam ghum jayega Aur whoh chehera bhi badal jayega Yeh zindagi mei itna samay hai kahan Ki naam pooche ya mukurahat dey ? ? Thought provoking.....

A usual thing happening in urban life is given beautiful poetic expression! Man has become so detached and self centred that he doesn't know even his immediate neighbour! The rural scene is far more hopeful that way! People live in harmony and love and everyone knows the other person! Enjoyed this beautiful poem Geetha! A10

A smile makes the day pleasant. A smile and some exchange of words will go in turning the life pleasant. I enjoyed both English and Hindi versions with a smile. Thank you.

New society is self content they can see but not speak, , Tongue is caged..when they will be in need some day they will come and say Hi, Sorry livin' here for long acquainted yet not known well composed poem that pelted on the said culture thank you Geetha

This is the irony of cosmopolitan towns, we don't know name of our neighbors. An impressive and beautiful poem.

This is simply phenomenal and very touching and a lyric song indeed.....Geetha.....I loved both version English and Hindi..........very beautifully composed............10/10 for the good composition and on smile

Wow! I am speechless Geetha! You are equally nice in two version.Loved.