Once A Poem Is Cocked Up... Comments

Great comment! I do so thoroughly agree with Dominic. Your Manet angle happens to us all, the best intentions and all that. And thank you for being so generous. Take care.

Very clever poem...yes this is defintely something I can relate to. I once attempted to compose a poem about a still life painting by Manet and it just got worse and worse and worse...can't remember what happened to it in the end. Anyway, it's a pertinent observation of a botched up job 10 from me!