Once A Poem Is Cocked Up... Poem by Shaun Cronick

Once A Poem Is Cocked Up...

Rating: 5.0


Once a poem is cocked up,
Anything done to it,
Makes it worse.
Simply read any of mine for conformation.

Saturday, June 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: educational,satire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 01 July 2020

Great comment! I do so thoroughly agree with Dominic. Your Manet angle happens to us all, the best intentions and all that. And thank you for being so generous. Take care.

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Dominic Windram 22 June 2020

Very clever poem...yes this is defintely something I can relate to. I once attempted to compose a poem about a still life painting by Manet and it just got worse and worse and worse...can't remember what happened to it in the end. Anyway, it's a pertinent observation of a botched up job 10 from me!

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