Once a poem is cocked up,
Anything done to it,
Makes it worse.
Simply read any of mine for conformation.
Very clever poem...yes this is defintely something I can relate to. I once attempted to compose a poem about a still life painting by Manet and it just got worse and worse and worse...can't remember what happened to it in the end. Anyway, it's a pertinent observation of a botched up job 10 from me!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great comment! I do so thoroughly agree with Dominic. Your Manet angle happens to us all, the best intentions and all that. And thank you for being so generous. Take care.