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Build me a boat, that can carry two, and both shall row, my love and I. Fred Neil

Verry beautiful poem

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I hate this because I am bull

nowhere nowhere the beautiful face is existed! nowhere nowhere the strength, the fortune is live yeah, in thyself in the inn of self in the inn of self mind everything is live strangely just need the true eyesight, eye-light of seeking///

There was nowhere for them to go Nothing for them to see No one for them to meet. There was no story for them to be in. beautiful great 10+++++++++++++++++

I simply love your poems Michael! Especially 'Chocolate Cake' I always have chocolate cake for my birthdays and desert. Sometimes even swimming！All of your poems was amazing and blissful hopr you write some more!

(cont.) 4 - She pushed herself against the boy, but he pushed back, filled with alarm. She asked: “Boy, do you find I’m strong? ” He said: “You are, for a girl. Now let go my arm.” So boy and girl met and both were satisfied. (Jan. … 31...2019) bri (:

(cont.) 3 - Little girl, do you find me beautiful? She said to him: “Yes I do indeed! ” Then she showed him her left titty. which shocked the boy so much he peed. (cont.)

(cont.) 2 - Came a girl wishing to be strong. She walked into the alleyway. She hadn't been there very long... before a pretty boy stood up to say: (cont.)

1 - Until you came along......... you? ? Who? ..ME? Yes, i CAN do somethin' 'bout it. Boy Meets Girl Meets Boy A boy wishing to be beautiful painted his face like a doll-girl. Then he waited at an alley dustbin hoping his boring life would unfurl. (cont.)

Nice little twist of an ending.

A marvelous poem coming out of a casual thought and simple actions n their observation.

You finna die baby

But there was nothing. I am like this line

Good poem in a good thought......I like to read this....10++++++++++++++

wERE GOING ON A BEAR HUNT WERE GOING TO CATCH A BIG ONE WURT A BOOTIFUL DAY WE ARE NOT SCARED!