Once, the sun shone all day
The birds sang, in a mood so gay
All round, the feeling of joy and happiness
Now, the gray clouds hang about dauntily
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very emotional poem njiri. personally i think its excellent. you show a lot of potential. keep it up and good luck =)
Yaaah! You do have what it takes to be a poet so, keep on writing for the love of the universe.Thanks for this peom. Edward Kofi Louis.