Saturday, April 9, 2016

Once! Comments

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ONCE! ! !
silence was once a disease, now a cure
brain was once the commander, now the slave
lie was once a sin, now a virtue
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Ali Rahimi
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Hamideh Shabani 17 April 2018

you are right.every thing change during the time.

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 April 2016

War was once a disaster, now a bless honesty was once the best policy, now stupidity. ONCE..... contrasts...... using contrasts is a literary way accepted in literature. you are using it powerfully and sometimes very sarcastic....... love this poem and your ability to write, thank you dear poet. tony

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