Tuesday, September 15, 2020

On Your Lap Comments

Rating: 5.0

All of a sudden you did
Vanished from me, my dear
Your delicate and lovely feelings
Passionate kisses, soft expressions
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Suresh Kumar EK
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M Asim Nehal 16 September 2020

Heartfelt poem. The cruel hands of time and fate do not spare anyone. One has to gulp this bitter truth and cherish the glorious past. Though poet is missing his beloved dearly he has to move on with the life. Excellent poem.5 Stars

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Varsha M 15 September 2020

Over the ages it is thought Nothing is static All is in motion Stagnation reaps nothing So keep moving Something good might seek you. Good poetry. Very well written.

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Suresh Kumar EK

Suresh Kumar EK

Kerala, India
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