On Your Lap Poem by Suresh Kumar EK

On Your Lap

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All of a sudden you did
Vanished from me, my dear
Your delicate and lovely feelings
Passionate kisses, soft expressions
Eyes reflecting full blue moon rays
Everything is missed now, my mind sways.

Those were our days
Of green and blue ways
On the hills and dales
We have explored with vigour
Life and love-filled together.
It was the real Godly paradise,
I could realise fully in my dreams.
We were wandering through that hill
Lush green filled valleys so beautiful
Where coffee plants blossomed all, in full.
But thorn fences around were really blocking,
Our passion-filled dreamy ways, cruelly paining
The slippery rocks, suddenly shifting and falling.


We made our nest there on the hills
Whirling wind and raining moonlight.
Your eyes woke for me in the morning
And they closed by my side, late evening
To dream about our life, ever pacifying.

Now I feel lonely and lost
Without you, there is no past.
When the colourful rainbows
Appear above distant mountains
I am immersed in your presence.
The feelings of bygone days
Retreating strongly like waves
And crushing against my lands.
All the sensational shores lost
Every lustful kissing is missed.

Oh my dear, more I can't bear
See, it is again full winter here.
All the leaves were fell and gone
To perish under the soil's hard love
I wish the same fate to me on your lap.w

Tuesday, September 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 16 September 2020

Heartfelt poem. The cruel hands of time and fate do not spare anyone. One has to gulp this bitter truth and cherish the glorious past. Though poet is missing his beloved dearly he has to move on with the life. Excellent poem.5 Stars

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Varsha M 15 September 2020

Over the ages it is thought Nothing is static All is in motion Stagnation reaps nothing So keep moving Something good might seek you. Good poetry. Very well written.

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