Saturday, January 28, 2012

On You Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I needed to
Could I count on you-
If it all looked like the end
Would you be my friend-
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Smoky Hoss
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Ken E Hall 10 February 2012

A true friend would surely stand up thats a real friend for sure...good definition...regards

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Eric Cockrell 28 January 2012

you are the man that defines 'friend'... great poem!

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Dave Walker 28 January 2012

Really like this, it brings a lot of memories back, of when i was in a real dark place, a place where I don't want to go to again. My poems justice part 1 and 2, and Mental Hospital, are that place. This is a great poem. I love it.

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