On Wings Of Grace! ! Comments

Geoff this is an amazing poem

A rich, taut structure, full of form that is in keeping with the imaginative premise. The only trip-up is in the 5th tercet, line 3. It is one accented syllable too long; it may be improved by dropping the modifier silent to read, 'For whisper shall roar many a lion.' The added article a is grammatically correct. Hope this helps. Cheers, Greg

That is the talk of those that hold the power to heal, it hurts, I know, but it is the only answer You are very brave indeed Love Duncan X

Thy words ring peace through out this land. A knight of gentleness and peace. Me thinks this read is of a higher grander than mine humble pen could dare place. Patricia