Thursday, October 24, 2013

On Waking Up... Comments

Rating: 4.5

Sometimes while going to sleep
I feel I am my own tomb,
The ceiling above its marble lid,
Or am I returning to mother's womb?
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Portia Burton
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Khairul Ahsan 24 October 2013

A beautiful piece! I too have similar feelings at times. If I may say, the last word does not fit well with the mood of the poem, I suspect.

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