Sultry heat
A tad bit softened
But concrete is still burning
With rays of summer
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ONE: The question disappears From the lips of nature most beautifully expressed this profound poem embodies the coming changes in nature, the same rituals every year,
You've captured the coming of autumn....This verse makes me feel that the season is about to reach out and slap me on the back. Terrific verse, Nosheen.
Outstanding poem, I have a friend in Lahore very dear to me, I hope you are away from the flooding, such a lovely poem, you mastered the English language😊
Nosheen Poems attain an inimitable beauty, when they speak of Nature. This one gripped me in a spell. Enjoyed. Top score and myfav
Autumn painted with beautiful colours of poetic imagination, dear Poetess Nosheen....10 + Favourite
A msrvellous poem that smoothly traverses through the changes with serene acceptance.
Nosheen, you have captured the exquisite beauty of this colourful season. Your poem is such a great tribute to autumn (Indian summer) . Both... a joy to behold!
Beautiful, beautiful poem. Your poetic expressions are just amazing. The crystalline images made me at close range with the wonders of nature, holds me spellbound. Top marks as always.
Beautiful poetry. As per my intuition, you can prosper leaps and bounds. I suggest you to read poetry of Pablo. You are capable of doing what he has done. Go ahead!
Beautifully painted the Insightful observations... well done...
Making them poetically and beautifully aware of what hardly anyone does notice, Excellent!
This transition, so well and finely noticed. An original and worth vision that takes hold of the reader,
TWO: but autumn every new year comes in different shades and speeds, Just think how exciting it is every year Once again I enjoyed this beautiful poem.5*****