*** On Valentine's Day *** Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

*** On Valentine's Day ***

Rating: 4.3


Hi sweetie pie so divine
Your beauty is so refined
The day has come to define
You’re my lucrative Valentine

The roses for you are not for any woman
It’s the roses grown from Eden
Our ties are not sudden
We’re closer to heaven


Looking at my bedroom’s wall
I see your ever sweet face there
I smile and take a fall
Your love for me to spare


A walking distance, I walk
To the Gifts’ Shop, I step in
I sigh and take a knock
My head goes gaga, to find the hint


What’s best for you is yet to come
It could be a small token, of no meaning
To tell Mom about you would be no harm
Dad would say “it’s your picking”


Sometimes I wonder, what’s made me love you
I guess your kind heart and understanding
The groove in you and your thick lips too
But most of all, your big blue eyes that conquering


Remember the first time I stared at you?
You were in the lobby ushering me
The next day, we were in bed, encaged, like a zoo
Making love till dawn, like crazy


Dear, on this auspicious date we lay
We conjoin our hearts, souls and love
I propose to you on this Valentine’s Day
May our marriage get the blessing from above




PS: I was inspired by the song ' Try Me ' by the group 'UFO'. The impact of the song has made this poem possible! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 February 2009

The extract from Francis Duggan's comment: From: Francis Duggan (Australia ;) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 2/9/2009 4: 00: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: valentine Hello Sulaiman Another 10 poem from you this one you just keep turning them out, good on you Sulaiman

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 February 2009

The extract from Shannon Newsom's comment: From: Shannon Newsom (... United States; Female; 40) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 2/9/2009 4: 04: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: valentine What a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing!

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Amal Hassan 13 February 2009

A really lovely poem. Simple but yet so pure.

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Tyrone Wingfield 12 February 2009

I have one word, AMAZING. This is exactly what I look for in a poem Keep up the great work

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 June 2021

5 Stars full for this great Tribute of Human Love so true. I have enjoyed a very lot!

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Darwin Henry Beuning 14 February 2016

My wish for all who love on this Valentine's Day, May it Last.

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Souren Mondal 14 February 2016

Yes.. Let us hope the love will last forever - :)

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Ken E Hall 19 February 2009

Luvli poem for valentines day to be with the one you love worth all the tea in china ++10++ regards uavaniceone

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Winnie Angel 18 February 2009

hey nice write....trully loving and blessing a lifetime valentine! ! ! ..

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Cherry Sha 13 February 2009

beautiful Love story...that would possible turn into marriage

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