Merrily swim we, the moon shines bright,
Both current and ripple are dancing in light.
We have roused the night raven, I heard him croak
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Downward we drift through shadow and light. Under yon rock the eddies sleep, Calm and silent, dark and deep. The Kelpy has risen from the fathomless pool, He hath lighted his candle of death and of dool: Very interesting lines. Enjoyed reading it. 10 for its sharing.
A superb night song with great imagery. Like to read again and again.Thanks for posting.
A beautiful poem having stunning expression. Thanks to his soul.
The sing-song of the rhythm and rhyme almost made me stop before I got to the dark underbelly of this piece. Okay, I'm a sucker for a cheap thrill provided by a literary dead body. It was enough to keep me reading on. It didn't turn the piece into high art but it was sufficient to compel me on. So that's enough for a brief diversion. A trifling narrative but competent enough to see through to the end..
I really enjoyed reading it, Walter...thank you.10++++ Cheryl