On Tour Comments

A driver can always find the humor in it, like watching t v.

Wow enjoyable glitch fixing poem! Kudos for a poetic realistic poem.

Interesting background to this poem. Raw cut language enhances the atmosphere. Personally I would have reduced the amount of rhyming, to emphasise discord, until harmony comes at the end, but it still works OK.

A wonderful poem creating the intense atmosphere, of behind the scenes, at the shows on rhe drama circuit!

Very descriptive write - sounds somewhat stressful though. Well written.

Sounds like alot of fun but you had best get some wrinkle cream. Great poem. Thank you.