I'm sitting here with a great big frown.
The feckin lights have broken down.
The producer is frantic and pulling out his hair.
If you've ever worked with him, that's not rare.
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Wow enjoyable glitch fixing poem! Kudos for a poetic realistic poem.
Interesting background to this poem. Raw cut language enhances the atmosphere. Personally I would have reduced the amount of rhyming, to emphasise discord, until harmony comes at the end, but it still works OK.
A wonderful poem creating the intense atmosphere, of behind the scenes, at the shows on rhe drama circuit!
Very descriptive write - sounds somewhat stressful though. Well written.
Sounds like alot of fun but you had best get some wrinkle cream. Great poem. Thank you.
A driver can always find the humor in it, like watching t v.