Saturday, October 10, 2009

On This Sunday Morning Comments

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from a clear morning sky
a crow swooped down
a lazy packet of bisuits
on the parapet wall
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Indira Babbellapati 13 October 2009

From: Brett Ackerman (Colorado Springs United States; Male; 44) To: Indira Babbellapati Date Time: 10/13/2009 3: 03: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: on this sunday morning Interesting subject to connect with to a certain day of meaning.

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Indira Renganathan 13 October 2009

I have seen a crow chasing and fighting fierce with a mynah for its prey...sunday or any other day, we can find many such bird-scenes around us daily, specially in the morning...only thing we should have a look-out for that....nice sunday snippet in your lovely words....thank you...and thanks for your immediate comment on my poem too

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 12 October 2009

yes, a simple and beautiful poem. but still portraying the truth of life, of relativity. and the absence of absolution in the superficial life. thank you.

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It is snippets of nature like this, that make for such touching poetry. Nature seeks sustenance all day and crows are astute creatures and I loved your poem. 10 Karin

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Ranjit Ravindran 11 October 2009

Yesterday i have seen a crow sipping the residue from a soft drink sachet... Took a picture of it too!

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Rakesh Bedi 11 October 2009

the word sunday makes us lazy; physically as well as mentally..... so, indira composes a lazy poem, creating metaphor through a crow....it was nice to read it, slowly n lazily, dear...thanks...

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