Friday, October 28, 2016

On This Day Comments

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'The trees and leaves are silent
as birds nestled in their branches
a few clouds that hovers overhead
with only skies and its seeing sun
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Jesus Diaz Llorico 29 October 2016

Thank you for a well refined comment Ms Bharati Nayak

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Bharati Nayak 28 October 2016

A lovely expression of your reflective mind, thanks for sharing.To quote a few lines- - - 'but as I maneuver around the bend I accidentally snapped a twig that brought me back to reality from my garden walls of fantasy and with many things left undone I'm back to the skies and its seeing sun.'

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