Thursday, July 8, 2021

On This Day Comments

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On this day…
A baby is born
and an old man dies
someone falls in love
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Kevin Patrick
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M Asim Nehal 09 July 2021

Contrasting things nicely written. I liked the comparison drawn by you Top Stars....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 July 2021

this poem has made my heart comfortable with this moment in my life thank you Kevin

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 July 2021

Indeed, these actions are constantly occurring in a person's life, of course with different names and details. Very insightful.

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Varsha M 08 July 2021

Your poem is really beautiful. But i don't agree with your closing lines. Good can never equal bad. We define good or bad from the perspective of person studied. Apart from context, nothing is good nor bad. Good insightful poetry.

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Chinedu Dike 08 July 2021

Insightful lines! A profound and compelling rendition..

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