On The Way To... Comments

Reading this poem, I could feel the coolness of entering a verdant bower and not the dreariness of being in a forest! Sensuous and seductive are your descriptions of Nature! ! Enjoyed very much! ! This deserves a 10

Did you notice something in yor composition? there is no Sha, no feelings at all, its a pure description of dense dark deep Forest... its the call and fashion of contemporary prosody...(except last few lines where yourself got into) Sha ji they say that poetry is not the sharing or feelings expressions but escape from it, unfortunately most of poets poets trying to tell their readers what they feel instead showing them or describe them, emotion and feelings sometimes jarr poem's essence(i m sure u got my point,) let others' fabolous minds to annotate it... over all it's a wonderfull composition and like it. but i dont like the poet notes let your poem explains itself...

Wonderful and Superb.2 Thumbs Up

dear poet, superb!