The blue sky roof expanse was fairly pleasant in noon
But you made me give away my dreams by evening
It began when we crossed the border of Bangalore at Hosur
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golden goddess temple is deep within your soul and of course mine!
hey Rema, beautiful description of a great pilgrimage. thanks for sharing with us. regards anju
an enjoyable read Rema, nice to read about your journey to the temple.
Hi Rema You have succeeded is taling the reader alon with you on a trip of golden goddess temple.A good narrative travelogue poem. well done Greetings Satheesan Rangorath
The way you have described the whole journey is very nice as every word of your poem reflects a picture which is unseen and still seen through your words which reflect the strength of words which you used in describing such a picturesque poem.
Stunning journey into lushes loveliness.....the capture of the rain...Remarkable Rema...your ability to use such flowing expression in the way you do...well it's amazing....a true poetess...10+ best wishes Jon.
I enjoyed this ride which was image-filled and when the rain-clouds suddenly appeared felt your apprehension!
an intimate trip to the golden goddess temple braving the not so intimate rain gods...a good narration, rema! i felt as if i was traveling with you in your old peugeot down bangalore - salem high way...10
a pure prsitine way of describing a religious place feel so much more at peace.