On The Threshold Comments

Peace of a still sea nicely painted.

Chopping admirable sentiments into lines doesn't eventuate in a very good poem. Assuming you want to improve as a poet (you do, don't you? 0, I'd suggest you stop writing for a while and immerse yourself in some good contemporary poetry. Nothing coming in, nothing going out. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me what you think of it. Yrs, JC