On the first summer day I lay in the valley.
Above rocks the sky sealed my eyes with a leaf
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This is gorgeous. I think it may have the most beautiful use of words that I have ever seen. Definitely a poem that calls you to read it again and again and again and get more out of it every time you do.
A beautifully envisioned equally beautiful nature poem. Thanks for sharing and congrats on modern poem of the Day.
This beautiful poem gives me a feeling of oneness with nature.
a poem with a sense of adventure and a brilliant description of the great outdoors.
Beautiful poem nourished with beautiful imagery and stylistic enhancement. Sylva
Total rubbish. A really dreadful poet.