Wednesday, July 23, 2008

On The Softball Field Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the diamond the tension rises,
Any mistake could lead to crisis.

The batter goes up to home plate,
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Sean Olivia
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kenedy nelsen 13 May 2022

I love this poem about softbal! I am only 13 and actually just got my first home run yesterday and this is a amazing poem about that

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softballperson42 11 March 2020

i like it bruv its very cashmoney of you

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Tay Ying Hui 04 December 2011

I am a softballer and I totally agree with your poem. Keep it up! : D

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Even though i had not been on a softball field, i tried to imagine what is supposed to happenon it. I like the words used like 'diamond'. Please continue writing. I will support you on and on and on! XD

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Emancipation Planz 23 July 2008

hey now.. love the chatter... the diamond... the game.. glad I came... I'm bat10 on a home run for this one..

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