Saturday, February 3, 2018

On The Skids Comments

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Like a stray dog he looked here and there
In search of what I couldn't decipher
But was humbled to count upon appetite
As the plea, for food, money and care might be
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 February 2018

A beautifully crafted well executed write. It conveys poverty and captures the deplorable condition of an outcast. A very honest write that gives a true picture of some society burdened with hunger and despair.10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 February 2018

Many many thanks Rose Marie, , , , , , I am humbled, , , , , , , , ,

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