Sunday, September 27, 2015

On The Shores Of Life Comments

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Alone in mild light
i wander
on the shores of life.
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Dr. Antony Theodore
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Sranisha Francis 29 July 2017

very great, .....................

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Paul Amrod 28 September 2015

A figure of speech in which apparently contradictory terms appear in conjunction is the defintion of Oxymoron which I did not find in this poem. This poem describes a spirit named Eternal which gives guidance and deliverance. Then comes the culmination of the eternal and the transiency of life on Earth. Feeling spiritually inspired to the Eternal we graduate from the lessons of life to the bosom of Abraham in a less tedious existence called Paradise.

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Liza Sudina 28 September 2015

LIfe - then a new Life. there is no repentance in your poems. just guessing.

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Sanjukta Nag 28 September 2015

Death is the beginning of a new life.. a new journey towards God for which we wait life long.. great write!

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