Saturday, August 6, 2011

On The Roof(Revision) Comments

Rating: 5.0

- This can be sung to the tune of Up On The Roof

After all the problems that I faced
I look for a good resting place
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james ivan almalvez
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Aqeb Benazir 09 August 2011

Brilliant job! this is very well constructed and the rhymes and the message is very sublime! 10/10!

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