On The Rise Comments

'of his heart's eyrie-pulpit of love. Then the hail of people surged and echoed everywhere. His path adorned with crimson-coloured carpet and cavaliers followed him.' Lit by the noble passion, the poet has written this impressive poem I think. I can see a philosopher in him. The racy narration is keeps the engages any reader. Hats off to your work vipins....

you are another Langston hughes, another Khalil gibran, but most of all a young shakespeare in telling the tale of a man with a heart only few and many came to respect... you are a great story teller...thanks for sharing...my view was of it sooooooooooo colorful and that is what took me on your jouney...

Good poem Vipins. You are indeed very articulate and use language fully for it's beautiful sounds.

Enjoyable to read and interesting projections I think this is a very good poem... Thanks for the invitation.... Jim Troy

The rise of your talent marked, studded in the rise of this poem...Well done Vipin Write write write coz talent in you want to rise above the height_Unwritten Soul

Truth and purity, generosity and philanthropy, these will bring us on the rise, no matter where we are now. This poem can be a source of inspiration for everyone who reads it. Simply brilliant. Keep it up, Vipins.

Very well said....with words on the rise of temperatue to the flair of poetry..every good thing is assumed to be warm with a welcome..yours came as the coffee freshly brewed..well done again..

Good poem. You have a good choice Of words. A good write.

very great poem you written and is different from what I read. very fanastic job :)

Very interesting story, here. It's very well threaded within this poem. I love this one, keep on writing masterpieces like this.