Thursday, October 13, 2016

On The Pulse Of Maturation... Comments

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Pearl white, ash black infant sparrows
Staring...at the empty bottles of merlot
Mesmerized...by their hued rufescent
Bemused...to the slow bleeding nuance
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr
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Elena Sandu 13 October 2016

I think I remember this powerful poem! Hints of the humans presence, and danger of crows could not stop the little sparrows enjoy life, follow their mothers hearts, how brilliant! Agree with Kumamarni, amazing penning, thank you!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2016

Nurtured threads are break free and they are mesmerized. While maternal mission ends Southern wind takes ahead. Sparrows live to fly is amazing. This is interesting poem.10

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