Wednesday, August 29, 2018

On The Plane Comments

Rating: 5.0

There are far west nations,
Little lights gleaming in the middle of the ocean.

My summer has been with a star lit sky,
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Safiyyah Manjra
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Anil Kumar Panda 16 September 2018

A beautiful poem on flying under the star studded sky and the feeling to come down and touch the grass. Enjoyed the sweetness in the poem. Thanks for posting.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 August 2018

A journey on plane has been astutely and touchingly delineated. Touching expression.Beautiful poem. Enjoyed.10

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Safiyyah Manjra 31 August 2018

thank you! i tried something different... i tried not to make it awfully long

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