Thursday, October 12, 2017

On The Other Side Of The Door Comments

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there is a blackness on the other
side of the door
waiting
beyond the breadth and depth of words
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GORDON GILHULY
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Richard Wlodarski 14 November 2017

Although your topic is loneliness, I sense that there is a lot more going on in this poem. You held me in the grip of suspense throughout. On the edge of my seat. Quite scared. Maybe it's just my imagination. Whatever it is, I enjoyed the poem immensely! Kudos!

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Gordon Gilhuly 14 November 2017

Thank you, yet again, Richard. How is your writing going these days?

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Richard Wlodarski 15 November 2017

I'm very happy with it! And I'm receiving a lot of great support and positive encouragement from some of the best on PH. Thank you for asking.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 October 2017

Such a great write, Gordon.......

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Gordon Gilhuly 12 October 2017

Thank you, Bernard. Hopefully, your writing is going well.

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Gordon Gilhuly 12 October 2017

Thanks, Bernard. I hope your writing is going well.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

The streets are a wet mockery leading only one way patient and confident and loneliness experiences are amazingly expressed here..10

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Gordon Gilhuly 12 October 2017

Thanks, KM.

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