Friday, January 27, 2012

On The Morrow Comments

Rating: 3.0

To write my soul upon the paper
as I wander with the shaper
Through the mist of time
Along the banks of the River Rhine
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(De Va) 05 February 2012

thank you all for reading this poem and for your comments...It is a vision I had...hugs n blessings to all...

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Sara Fielder 05 February 2012

Very fantastic and imaginative. Great job De Va.10+++

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Wahab Abdul 05 February 2012

What a nice poem is it! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading too. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us.

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Charles Darkly 03 February 2012

I dig this one quite a bit. Poetic and tells a story. :)

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Deep Mukherjee 03 February 2012

beautiful; thanks a lot for sharing :) ...........

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Dave Walker 01 February 2012

A really fantastic poem, with a really beautiful flow. A great write.

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Cosmic Dreamer 31 January 2012

A wondrous journey through the mind of a genius... Thanks for the ticket...

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Pheko Motaung 27 January 2012

Impressive and majestic.A great write.Thanks

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