On The Melting Of Snow In Spring Comments

striking image of melting snow in spring from a fresh out look...I enjoy reading your work, this poem gets a 10

Nice one. I like the alliteration in the last line. It's a pity you couldn't get a good rhyme for that last line - try working on it.

Another descriptive write - so glad the snow has gone in England that's for sure. Regards Mark

WOW! SO GOOD THAT I'M SPEECHLESS!

Very fresh and nicely crafted. Your poem has a 'spring' in its step that lifts the spirit.

Sweet happy little poem, Paige. Loved it! Keep writing and sharing with us. A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn