Friday, April 20, 2018

On The Lighter Side Comments

Rating: 5.0

My previously overgrown
belly
disappeared
Magically
...
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Asher Proschansky
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Chinedu Dike 28 May 2018

A beautiful creation written with tinge of humour. Well conceived and elegantly brought with artistic brilliance. Thanks sharing Asher.

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Bri Edwards 25 May 2018

(cont.) .....to MyPoemList, and i think i'll borrow it to include in my/our June 2018 showcase of poems, to be found in my PH poem list, with a title which includes the month and year. authors' names are always included. thanks. if you have questions, please ask or refer to previous showcases. This was so much on the 'lighter side', so much so that it could NOT hide! It was full of lots of appearance fun, and, lost, on me, was NOT your pun. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 25 May 2018

(cont.) .. OOPS! missing from the wall... was not supposed to have been sent with my first section of comment! this gave me a LAUGH: with half my shadow missing from the wall was really on my sides.........YES! being on my sides is MUCH BETTER than hanging over your pants' zipper! ! ! (cont.) ...

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Bri Edwards 25 May 2018

i like the About Me you posted on PH; i AM a primitive primate by the way! and i enjoy your Poet's Notes here. now to read the poem, whose title reminds me of an 'old' newspaper cartoon series. my singing voices? or voice? // my inners seam nowhere as hip..........innards seem? ? ? (continued) ... missing from the wall................

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 April 2018

I no longer roll around like great big whales..... very nice and interesting........ thank u dear poet.. tony

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The Muse 20 April 2018

That is so funny Asher. ROFL, ROFL, ROFL. Well done!

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