Tuesday, September 22, 2015

On The Island Shores Comments

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When the sun goes down with her hopes still ashore
all that she seeks his presence.
the breeze of the cold twilight yet too weak to leash her lonely thoughts,
and yet she walks as a lonely in the lifeless shore of the island.
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Anjana S kumar
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Chinedu Dike 11 October 2015

A lovely romantic poem, a blissful recall of voyage of pure bliss nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart. Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly. Nicely encapsulated poem written in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing Anjana.

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Liza Sudina 22 September 2015

melancholic, but happy.

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