. On The Horns Of The Moon Comments

Who can know the heart with it's dark and secretive contents? Until the heart can become a place wherein lies love, peace, grace and mercy then there will be room for many to come in and enjoy it. Lovely poem.

I'm re-reading your poem at your request... it is well worth re-reading... as I said before - fantastic imagery! Terry

A fine succinct write with good use of the bracketed repeated line at beginning and end for emphasis and poetic effect.

Adeline, I adore this piece... the title is captivating...exquisite! The words pull me as the moon pulls the ocean tides. Outstanding Write! ! ! ; -) -Kelly.

well penned.. pain is a part of life, suffering is by choice.

Wonderful... fine imagery... Terry

So so good, a fantastic poem

Neat!

'Tis an amazin' Poem! ! top marks! ! !

Nice work and wide vision from the caverns.......10

loved it, 'specially the repeated lines and ominous feel. -chuck

Definitely not a warm-hearted poem. Vivid imagery here - painful, cold and bitter. Depressingly superb! Linda :)