On The First of July(1)
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Thank you for information about the First of July- that opened this poem up to me! It is sad to think upon people who do not know when they were born- -there are heartbreaking stories behind such a thing. Now I shall read this again with a deeper appreciation and understanding! 10
Never to forget evergreen leaves of life. You have a wonderful technique to connect different images. A well written poem. Much informative 10+
Thanks Dear poet Kesav for your wonderful comment about my humble poem..Kind regards and all the best
This has perked me up Soran another well written and delivered philosophical poem about love and life. And if taken from past snapshots of your life, there are elements of chance or fate finely woven into it. Sometimes somethings happen for a reason.They're meant to be. Excellent poem Soran 10++ and added to good reads.
Honestly I am very proud of your high level of understanding deep poems, for example I put this poem on this site for many years but nobody reacted to it, even I don’t think anyone has read it, but thankfully you are the one among few people who can good read the poem and write great poems as well, excellent and thanks for your lovely comment
Bleak, leak, peak, speak! Philosophy of love and life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
that is right Philosophy of love and life, and we can express them in so many ways and form, each of us is a special small world within the big world, the poetry can be the language of these worlds....Cheers mate, you are brilliant poet, well done
Dear poet Susan, Your pencil is more beautiful than luxury palaces, when you write about a poem that is neglected but alive and strong with its significance Hermeneutics. Really you are discovering the pearls in the depths of the creativity oceans, we wish you a good health, happiness and every success.