Wednesday, June 18, 2014

On The First Day Of Monsoon Comments

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O drifting clouds
please awhile wait
carry seeds of my love
shower on my beloved!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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* Sunprincess * 19 June 2014

...........love the romantic touch in this write.....my favourite stanza ........... and you penned it so beautifully.... ~ Carry o clouds my tears for her soothe her with my kisses' touch tell her though she's gone from me far I love her as ever very much! ~ ..........this is the kind of poetry every girl wants to read....

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Colleen Courtney 18 June 2014

Such a beautifully written poem of yearning for a loved one. The last stanza is lovely!

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