Friday, July 5, 2013

On The First Day... Comments

Rating: 5.0

you sent me a mail,
it just came to me flying
with a new foliage
in a full-grown tree.
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Neela Nath Das
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Shahzia Batool 06 July 2013

a fully thought out and worked out poem, you took special care of all the details...pleasant to read! ! !

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Patricia Grantham 05 July 2013

A very spellbinding poem Hari. It really gets one to thinking as to the who, what or why? A good one.

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Patricia Grantham 05 July 2013

A very spellbindinng poem Hari. Very mystical in it's contents and meanings. Who, what or why? . Good.

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Patricia Grantham 05 July 2013

A very spellbinding poem Hari. Reminds me of Autumn with it's leaves falling every which way on the ground but it still creates a beautiful scenery however it fell by some unknown guest. A poem of mystical meaning.

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