Sunday, December 31, 2017

On The Eve Of 2018 Comments

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Winkling little naughty stars
I know your dim light can lull
But I don't want to dream
Tonight the moon will be full.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Mahtab Bangalee 03 December 2018

beautiful poetic expression- All my sweet friends will sing And with you, they will dance Farewell to the sweet seventeen, Romance, romance only romance,

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Indira Renganathan 09 January 2018

A juvenile new year poem from an old experienced poet....kudos

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Valsa George 02 January 2018

She is now eighteen, Let us swim in a milky stream, A date with the Happy New Year, Let us wish and let us dream. ................................... A lovely welcome song heralding the New Year! Once more a Happy New Year to Akhtarji- the unrivalled King of Romance!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 December 2017

I call it a cordial piece of poetry with a sweet message that awakens your sleeping friends early in the morning on the maiden day of 2018! I quote, “Go and awake my sleeping friends/Let them read it and they'll fly/A single word what else it may be/Yes, love I write on the sky”. Thanks for sharing…Happy New year 2018.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 December 2017

A wonderful well penned piece written under the magnificent moon. A great write perfect for the New Year 2018.10

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Bharati Nayak 31 December 2017

Eureka! She is now eighteen, Let us swim in a milky stream, A date with the Happy New Year, Let us wish and let us dream. - - - - - Such a lovely welcome poem for 2018 ! ! Wish you a very Happy New Year ! !

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