On The Edge Of Your Heart❤️ Comments

This is one of your best poem.

I came to read it again...! - How many times in our life, we ignore our heart? We often do...Thank you, for opening my heart to feel again! Who are we without a heart?

Defying the security of firewalls........brilliant.......thank u, dear friend......anjandev roy.

Some wonderful imagery in this excellent poem.

The sunflower heart will open before the sun to embrace your love..10+

So nice of you to put your love on the edge of my heart, I will remove the firewall now to make the entry smooth. Loved the way you drafted this poem..

A spontaneous philosophical poem, poetically conveyed and cutest created. I always enjoyed your poems, limericks or whatsoever. The language that comes uttered from you mouth is impreesing my literate soul, Asim Sir! I have watched you dance that tango. Unbelievable beauteous! FIVE stars.

I read this poem off-line: I had to go 'on-line'- why? - I do not know! And, when we do not know why, we already know why: because, something within us was moved, and affected by what we read: this poem harmonised itself with my heart; or, vice-versa: it is authentic, poetic, and touches a depth I was not aware of; and that is what a good poem does!

Good one. Dance me a tango With your beautiful heart Beating at a love angle Let them beat together from the start Let our love course through my artery And veins giving power like a battery Lets collabo on this one mate. Give us a verse and when done you post for D K Swain to read

Brilliant imagery just not exhausting anyway. Let the sun of my smile attract Your sunflower heart, To open up and dance with me a tango..... beautiful closure.