On The Edge Of Time Comments

Well done, the edge is slippery.

Of course, this is wonderful poem in indifferent style.

Wonderful poem related to the time and we call it our lifespan

scholarly writings............/// love it

I wonder on this cylcical process...... A nice thought provoking poem..10.

Great depth. Sheer beauty. Human dilemma so artistically captured. A 10

Dreams are unpredictable. Sometimes, they remain a dream, just a bud, .never to flower. At the same time, many dreams have been fulfilled too. When dreams come true they shine like bright stars twinkling all around. I loved this philosophical poem, Asim ji. Praying all your dreams come true.....10

your spacing in typing brings out clearly the silhouette which in autumn more springs love shows the bit around it real imagery mine creativity yours MAN