On The Edge Of Spring. Comments

A beautiful poem my friend!

I have believed this to be about ushering spring, I think most living creatures love spring. Thanks for sharing. Please review my poem 'Deer Hunter'

this is not totally clear to me but it was much more entertaining than the poetry i read of several other poets found at 'who is online'. i wish you used punctuation to denote sentences. and it seems haphazard how you decide in which lines to capitalize the first word. i especially enjoyed these lines: And the wild watermelon wine that perfumes the air On nights like this Would hurry us along the lanes and pathways thanks for sharing. bri :)

very warm and inviting